TLC by Chrouya
Script:	 Hentai Ouji 09 [tl][timed][edit]
Workraw: Hentai Ouji 09 [WR]

2
{\i1}You're doing it wrong!{\i0}
{\i1}Get your act together!{\i0}
{closer to Japanese translation}

18
{\i1}Since Tsutsukakushi hasn't come by today, I guess she's still angry.{\i0}
{\i1}Since Tsutsukakushi hasn't come by today, I wonder if she's still angry.{\i0}
{just a little contextual difference}

49
I want to renew our friendship.
I want to make up with you.
{I believe this is what people say in a normal way. At least, I think.}
{http://tangorin.com/general/%E4%BB%B2%E7%9B%B4%E3%82%8A <-- see sentences}
{just an alternative. If applied, 64 must be changed accordingly}

92
even though we're alike in many ways.
as I surpass you in many other skills.
{masatteiru tokoro ga takusan: a lot of things where I'm superior to you}

93
Is that so?
You think so?
{mocking}

97
I'd beat you by a mile!
{due to it being in the background I might not hear it that well, but I think she's saying it's her routine to practise as to say she's a talent}

99
It's easy enough to measure.
You'll see when we have a contest.
{kichinto kisotte mireba wakaru : You'll properly know when we try having a competition}

100
Let's have a contest then!
Let's go for it then!
{If 99 is applied, change this one to reduce redundancy}

201
About you being uncool in school, swimsuits, and t-the 100% smile.
About you being cool in school, swimsuits, and t-the 100% smile.
{You have to liberalize this one. she says uncool is past tense, as she wished for him to be cool.
so she turned him into cool in school as well as the other things}

213 
Mad pumpkin! Rotten pumpkin! {Still missing two phrases. tlc}

first phrase:
You squash! Eggplant! Potato head!
{唐茄子 ぼけなす おたんこなす!}

second phrase:
Pumpkin-headed pumpkin pants!
{かぼちゃ頭！かぼちゃパンツ！}

215
Your mom is a chocolate!
Your mom is a jack-o'-lantern!
{this one should've been obvious}

257
I'll do anything you wish for. {tlc}
{Don't see why this has tlc brackets, it's okay}
{It's the cat god :OOO}
{If you want that comma in: If there's something you wish for, I'll do anything for you}

265
But you... you didn't care about me at all!
But you... you actually didn't care about me at all!
{missed hontou wa --> puts more emphasis that he didn't care from the start}